THE POOP MISTAKE – a book in progress
by Vimmy (age 6 years old)
[final version to be] illustrated completely by Mom
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ONE DAY A FAMLIY GOT A DOG.
HIS NAME WAS KLAY.
HE WAS PLAYFUL–EXITED AND HAPPY.
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THEN THEY ATE DINNER
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THEN THEY TOOK A WALK. KLAY DID NOT NO HOW TO WALK ON A LESH,
SO HE PULLED AND PULLED AND HE PULLED.
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THE NEXT DAY THEY TOOK KLAY ON A WALK
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AND WHEN THEY GOT TO THIER GRANDMA AND GRAMPA’S HOUS . . .
AFTER 20 MINITS HE POOPED ON THE RUG IN THER HOUS.
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AND EVERYONE WENT
NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO! NO!
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AND MOM SHUT HIM OUTSIDE WITH ME AND GRANDMA
[WHILE] MOM AND GRAMPA CLENED UP.
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AND WHEN WE WERE COMING HOME
HE WAS BARKING AT APACHEY.
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WE LOVE KLAY
BUT HE HAS A LOT TO LERN.
THE END
Notes from the editor: Vimmy’s book was produced just as originally written. I didn’t have the opportunity to ask Klay (or Clay) how he preferred to spell his name, but Vimmy chose a K so I did it her way. She always like that. Exited means Klay was acting with “high energy.” Lesh is that thing attached to a dog’s collar, and Apachey (probably Apache) is an Airedale Terrior who lives in the neighborhood. I hope you enjoyed this “rough” draft of Vimmy’s very first picture book as much as I’ve enjoyed posting it.
Hooray for Vimmy!! Nobody could have written a better story. It has everything one would want in a well told tale!
Love it!
Wonderful!
How about blurbing it? blurb.com
A charming book with great illustrations. I like it just as it is.
LOVE IT! Including the creative spelling. Mom is an excellent artist, too!
Dear Vimmy and Alice. Delightfully creative and well illustrated. The story leaves me grinning.
Awesome ! Loved it. I willl get Aish and Dyu to read and review it. 🙂
nice, really good for someone her age. She’s got talent!!!!!!:D
Wow! Vim’s gonna be a great writer one day, i’m sure 😀 -Aishma